Methodology I, Giving feedback

Now is your turn to help the learners in to improve their performance when producing a text.

Consider the background of this writing task (Copy provided by your teacher).
Year 10 students read a book called "To Kill a Mockingbird". They are working in groups to create a newspaper related to the setting of the novel. Each student has to produce a specific text type.
1. Find out some information about the novel.
2. Read the planning thoughts and the text produced by the student.
3. Provide feedback considering the following criteria:
A: Quallity of ideas (10 pts.)
-Content
-Critical thinking
B: Organization (10 pts.)
-Paragraphing
-Linking devices
C: Language (10 pts.)
-Vocabulary
-Grammar and syntax
Your feedback needs comments, explanations, ways of eliciting and examples from the students' writing to justify your assessment. Present your analysis in front of the class!